I remember that day, I got that call,
My whole world fell apart...
And broken was my heart.
I remember that day, you were taken from me,
Your calm, composure would never again be.
In your warm arms, I could never again flee...
I remember how you loved your old oak tree,
And how you hated the smell of a bee.
Wild flowers were always the best,
I didn’t forget you...
I still remember...
I like it. I know this is supposed to be emotional and it is but your writing usually cuts into soul and I can feel but this one is kind of like a paper cut. MORE EMOTION DON'T TELL ME HOW YOU FEEL SHOW ME!!! idk if that makes sense...
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